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Erica Drayton's avatar

I've been wanting to participate in these every week but I'm just so busy I hardly have the time. I thought today I would just do some free writing and treat it like a journal entry more so than a fiction piece. Here are my morning thoughts as I head into the weekend, as told in 100 words:

This was a rough two weeks for me as I am moving, packing, buying a house, selling the one I live in. That kind of pressure is enough to topple any rational human being. Couple all of that with planning my son’s second birthday and I bought near collapsed.

But then there was another added stressor. One I sort of knew was coming but tried as best I could to avoid and ignore it. Sometimes you can’t ignore or avoid the inevitable. I had a scare that I could lose my job. It came at me like a tidal wave.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

SCENTED…

It was one of those days

A day when the world smelt like swimming pool, I was drowning in it.

The noise too noisy…

The people too present…

And regret of leaving the house was rapidly bubbling up inside me.

How I wished to be far away from this place.

I wandered, aimless, desperate for something untouchable.

The metro stairway was dotted with winos, the addicted and the homeless, all laying like discarded rags along the tunnel, the chlorine stench changed to ‘eau de public loo’, despair, I gagged.

Then I saw her… and all I could smell was lust…

A collaboration with my daughter, 50/50 Rosie first!

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