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Redd Oscar's avatar

[MY 50 WORDS]

The hills bent towards them before she could respond. The road climbed to vertical and then overhead. The van did not fall.

"You're scaring me!" she cried, her hair vertical beneath her.

"Good, that means we'll break out of this loop."

"wha--?" the sky shattered.

"Welcome back to the beginning."

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Your 50 plus my 50 result in this:

“Are you sure this is the way? We’re, quite literally, in the middle of nowhere?” she said, gripping the steering wheel of their camper van.

“Would you say we’ve reached the end of the world?”

“You’d have to be blind not to think so!”

He smiled. “We’re almost there then.”

She stared out the windshield, watching the dust blow across the Texas landscape.

“You still haven’t told me what’s out here.”

“See it for yourself.” He got out.

“What is there to see in the dark?” She followed.

“Look up.”

She looked up, awestruck by the bright universe above her.

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