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Forkbeard Jon's avatar

As the sun was setting, the people of Snow Hallow listened from their homes. Yuki-onna will emerge soon from her year long slumber. If she’s heard weeping, all the children must hide till the end of Winter. But if she begins to sing, no one in Snow Hallow is safe.

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Then instead of either, a newborn baby’s cry echoed on the mountain. People stepped into the snow, wondering what it meant. One by one they turned to Haruto, the young man afflicted with that embarrassing case of frostbite last winter, who blushed cherry blossom pink and ran into the dark.

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As the sun was setting, the people of Snow Hallow listened from their homes. Yuki-onna will emerge soon from her year long slumber. If she’s heard weeping, all the children must hide till the end of Winter. But if she begins to sing, no one in Snow Hallow is safe.

“[My 50 Words]”

As dusk began to envelop the village all fell silent, anticipation growing in the cold night air.

Then it happened.

An almost imperceptible sound drifted from the mountains, growing louder by the second… it was laughter! What did this mean?

Confused faces were replaced with fear as the avalanche began

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