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very interesting story, especially the setting. I am not sure as to how to end it at this time, I think that will take some thought. But what you have so far I like.

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More like Limbo. I think the head injury is the key.

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I say.... a coma! Or purgatory of some kind. Great story idea. Had me curious even by the title :)

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