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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Heart-stopping. Well done.

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Stephanie Loomis's avatar

https://open.substack.com/pub/stephanieloomis/p/lost?r=46zzt&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web

I picked up from another 100-word story. Just for fun--and because I want to know what happens next!

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Ben Woestenburg's avatar

Oh yes, lost our boy in Vancouver's Chinatown, once. If you ever want to see a woman melt down, try losing your child in Chinatown. (I'd suggest NOT, but that's just me.)

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Poor Timmy. A tasty morsel for the dinosaurs.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Haha, Erica, I lost my daughter more times than I can count in toy stores when she was tiny... thankfully a happy ending each time but oh the panic! Great story! Poor Timmy though, poor mama!

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